shobha - Wednesday, March 05, 2008 4:18:28 AM

shobha
Mar 5, 2008 at 2:49 AM
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Painting by Shobha Pandit on Photoshop

From My Inner Carrel..

In soft alone moments
When even Time lies asleep,
I feel the words flutter restless
Like a bird waiting to fly,
Like unread words in a book,
Trapped feelings, never expressed,
Thoughts deep buried, forbidden fancies,
Words playing riot to break the bars
In the elongating shadows of
Quiet winter evenings and take flight,
Oh, then I am a caged bird no more.

Shobha Nayar Pandit

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I like the idea of Time sleeping. I think you need to describe what a soft, alone moment is. Is it dark? Are any night insects outside? How do your walls look? How does your breath feel?

I think the comparison of the soul as a bird trying to fly is a good one. When we create it gets to fly about.

Lucy

I just took a look at these images shobha and they are all fine examples of original art, your style is very individual and they must have taken hours to produce. Thanks for sharing them with us and the poetry is just a joy to read. You have a sincere heart and mind wise one.

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Shobha, beautiful mind along w/ art, and words, I'm breathless just awesome and oustanding.

Ciao Ciao

LucyLove

Just beautiful Shobha! Eloquent and elegant!

Thanx Lucy for your valuable comments...

I see you have deep insight...thanx for stopping by and for appreciating my work..it gives me great encouragement.

shobha replied to Magicrystal’s comment:
Mar 6, 2008
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Thanx so much ....do keep coming back///

shobha replied to Deena Muzzi’s comment:
Mar 6, 2008
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Thanx Dee...you are very generous...and i appreciate that

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You welcome Shobha... be blessed

LucyLove

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this is a very beautiful poem. i really identify myself, somehow, with it.

you are wonderful person, Shobha. thank you.

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You have a quiet simplicity, Shobha, that is very elegant indeed. Have you ever published a book of your poetry? If not, you really should, or if you have, I'd love to read it.

Thanx Renee....as a matter of fact I have published a book of poems titled "Eternity and Other Poems"...but its available with my pulbisher by emailing

profsky@cal.vsnl.net.initers Workshop publications (Kolkata) can

How wonderful--I will see if I can buy a copy tomorrow!

I think the email id ive printed is faulty...the exact one is"

profsky@cal.vsnl.net.in

Thanx dear for the appreciation...

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Hi, Shobha! Outstanding poem and all of the visuals have inspired me - i wish I could vote more than once as in an election. I'm very much looking forward to a flurry of fantastic dreams tonight. I'm truly honored to know you and learn something of myself and our world each time I visit.

Thanx Reckon...I value your comments immensely as I know it comes from a very perceptive and creative person!!! I have posted some entries for the theme design contest tho I know I dont have any chances of winning...but i believe in trying and giving it all a chance cos life is short and we must live it full!!!!

shobha - Wednesday, March 05, 2008 4:18:28 AM

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