Translation: Hermosas manos, pequenas y grandes a la vez

Feel free to let me know of any corrections.

Beautiful hands, small and big at the same time,

perch over my head. My mouth rocks to kiss them repeatedly

while you let me know with a glance full of words

you receive my love

and yours walks toward me

to transform into my double.

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I really like the ending of this poem. I'm just not sure about "my mouth rocks," it seems like the wrong word choice. How about quivers?

Thanks for taking the time to look at it :-) I was trying to convey rock back and forth. Do you have a better idea?